It was alright
It was pretty good, I mean, some parts were good like when Otacon started pissing like crazy, and when Snake was like "Yeah I'd hit that!" Anyhow, in my opinion, you should try to tone it down... Metal Gear Awesome is one of my favorite things on Newgrounds.
My opinion:
You should probably tone down on the graphics... The original graphics were fine, I mean, these graphics aren't completely bad, but they're too good.
Try not to be too insane about it, keep it at a pace because this one was waaaay too fast and random, I mean, the other one was as well but it kinda kept at a limit.
Try not to overuse jokes as well such as the Jesus thing.
Anyhow, it was good, just kind of... I'm not sure how to put it... But try to keep it up I guess, and good luck on your next project as well.